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The Love of Death

There once was a girl who dreamed of such love,
She found what she wanted on wings of a dove.
Into the ground she cradled her head,
Thinking of times when she would be wed.
Only when moon would graze the water,
Would her true love be there to watch her.
She danced at the thought of being celebrated,
And clung to her love with feelings mutated.
Along came the ghost of evil once past,
And persuaded her love into tempest fast.
The ground she walked upon faded in shame,
And no longer could she carry his name.
She wept in the well that she found in the hill,
And carried his child twice more though the mill.
Death then found her in the well,
And it took its place upon her veil.
It croaked and shouted and laughed with glee,
Proclaiming its love there for thee.
She accepted here and took her fate,
And left loves once child there with hate.
She now resides in hells deaths door,
And wonders why nevermore.
©2007-2009 ~TwistedMsWonderland
:icontwistedmswonderland:

Author's Comments

I'm so tired.
I really have no idea if this is the right catagory.
Sorry

:heart:


For all I am, I thank you.
For all I do, I blame you.
For what I think, You make me.
For what I create, You inspire me.

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:iconbritish-wolf:
wow, absolutely beautiful. I don't think I can say anymore about it.
:icontwistedmswonderland:
Thank you.
It was late at night when I wrote it.
I coudn't sleep.
And I had some thoughts running though my head.

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Down the rabbit-hole,
Through the door,
And into the land of Wonderland.
:iconbritish-wolf:
ahhh. I definately understand that....stupid late night thoughts. lol
:icontwistedmswonderland:
Well, I suppose they aren't that stupid when someone is contributing to them, huh?

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Down the rabbit-hole,
Through the door,
And into the land of Wonderland.
:iconbritish-wolf:
I guess the stupidity of the thoughts would depend partly on their subject matter: thoughts of death of naughty, dirty thoughts. and who's contributing?
:iconminakorai:
:hug: 'Tis lovely my dear. 'Don't think anyone else could make a better rhyme of thoughts and feelings.

:heart:

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.::More Then Meets The Eye::.
:icontwistedmswonderland:
Thank you kindly. :D :heart:

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Down the rabbit-hole,
Through the door,
And into the land of Wonderland.
:iconout2getu:
It makes me want to see it illustrated into a short comic book.

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a mime is a terrible thing to waste
:icontwistedmswonderland:
It could be possible...
Would someone like to illustrate it, maybe? :omfg:

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Down the rabbit-hole,
Through the door,
And into the land of Wonderland.

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